The Memories Within the Trees

first book

WE SHOULD INCLUDE the bountyhunters squad in the first book. looking for the treeman monster. wandering around, interrogating and torturing people.

the treeman monster finds arbe in the forest and bring it to orios farm - that is why she thinks she knows the shadow beneath the trees.

and include generals death in the spanish version, amend the bodies scene set up after the fight, so General Bruum is full of stings from the wasps. these would add a few thousand words.